A lot of beginning writers fall into a ‘mind trap’. Literally; they spend way too much time in their head. Some writing help to keep the scene moving.
The Mind Trap: How to Keep a Scene Interesting When a Character Thinks
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A lot of beginning writers fall into a ‘mind trap’. Literally; they spend way too much time in their head. Some writing help to keep the scene moving.
There are 2 kinds of POV you should use. (There’s three, but don’t use the last.) Here’s some writing help for the multiple points of view in your novel.